Research: Audience feedback on practice shot

After creating an opening 1 minute practice of my music video I have collected audience feedback on what people think about the practice, this will help me determine the strengths and weaknesses of my practice clips and ultimately help me create a better final piece. Below are some of the comments in which i have collected from various different people.

The concept of the music video is interesting however a lot of the shots are shaky and will need to be stabilised. 

I like the different shots throughout the music video however the miming to the lyrics are slightly off and would need to be changed.

The shots chosen in the woods are good and I like the colour correction however the some shots are out of focus and shaky meaning they will need to changed. 

These comments I have collected help me give me an idea of how I can improve my music video, it also shows me the strengths in which i can either keep or redo to make it even better. I will take all of these comments on board so that I will get the best results.